In class, we watched a film called 'Tyrannosaur' which inspired me to develop my pre-production even further by answering the questions below. Tyrannosaur focuses on strong character development and issues and dilemmas that make the characters who they are.
How can you enrich your narrative?
I will enrich my narrative by giving the characters dilemmas that would cause a disruption to the equilibrium of the narrative meaning it is essential for them to repair the problems they are having to face. This means that throughout my TV series, there will not be a consistent equilibrium that keeps the narrative stable and instead, there will be numerous disruptions. This will make my TV series more interesting because the events that occur will be unpredictable and the audience will not know what to expect, therefore creating tension within the different episodes.
What elements can you add to bring your characters alive?
I will use the stories of their past as a main element in order to bring my characters alive because it will help the audience to understand why the characters are who they are and for some of them, how their past caused a disruption to their lifestyle. For example, Clare (the wife of Jack) could have numerous scars around her body but of course, due to being wiped of memory, she does not remember where they came from. After the dreams that enabled Clare and Jack to understand that they recently got married (which is the reason the characters are in the hotel), Clare will have dreams much later in the series which show that before her and Jack got married, she was domestically abused by him which is the reason for her scars. This will cause further conflict within the hotel and is a major disruption of the equilibrium. The idea of abuse came from 'Tyrannosaur' in which the female protagonist, Hannah, was abused and raped by her husband, James.
I also believe that conflict and romance are very important elements which can be used to bring my characters alive because at times, it will bring out their true personalities and it will also make the series more realistic because it is only normal for there to be conflicts and romance when both male and female characters are trapped in a hotel together. The first romance is between Clare and Tyler which occurs before Clare and Jacks's marriage is revealed. Sean will also fall in love with Holly however this is mainly due to her looks and their personalities clash which results in their relationship not working out immediately because Holly does not feel the same way about Sean. There will be a major conflict between Max and Jack because Jack always wants to take control and believes that his plan of escaping out of the hotel is the only 'correct' plan. However, Max strongly disagrees with him because he is extremely fascinated by science and the supernatural so thinks they should use a different method to escape. The other characters are torn between who's side to take which causes further conflict.
How will you actively seek to serve your chosen audience?
Due to my TV series being based around the genres of horror and supernatural, I will ensure that I include elements that are likely to make my audience feel emotions such as frightened and I will also use scenes that provide a great amount of suspense because my audience should enjoy TV shows and films that leave them at the edge of their seats. I am focusing on ghosts as my paranormal creature because they are quite realistic due to many people believing in them. This in turn should help my audience to engage more with the TV series because the events that occur will be more believable, especially for those that already believe in the supernatural.
Wednesday, 26 November 2014
Thursday, 20 November 2014
Production Proposal
What I am planning on making:
- Poster design
- T-shirt design
- Mug design
The poster: The
poster would include: the title of the show; the slogan; the setting (the
haunted hotel) and possibly the male and female protagonists of the show. I am
doing a poster because I know it is something my audience (teenagers aged
15-19) would be interested in buying as it is not ‘immature’ and it will help
to convey the overall tone of my show.
I would use a font that is similar to this because it is dramatic looking therefore immediately informs my audience that the TV show is based upon the genres of horror and supernatural. Additionally, this font is very bold and eye-catching so would stand out on the poster.
I would like to use a hotel that looks similar to this because the dark colours are very intense and they represent mystery and the unknown.
Possible slogans I could use on my poster:
- Don't dream it
- Only one way out
- Who will escape?
- Don't close your eyes
The t-shirt:
For
my t-shirt, I would have a simple colour such as black or white for the
background and in the centre of the shirt, I would have one of the slogans in
the font used for the title on the poster. The colour of the slogan would be
contrasting to the colour of the shirt, for example, if the shirt was black,
the font would be white. I feel that due to its simplicity, more people within
my audience are likely to buy it and I have chosen to use black and white
because they are multi-sex colours that appeal to both the males and females
within my audience.
The mug: The mug would be either black or white with a red inside and
a red handle. The red colour symbolises blood and danger and it would also be
dripping down the sides of the mug to put more emphasis on it. There would be
various mug designs to choose from, each having an image of a different
character from the TV show on it. This way, members of my audience can buy a
mug which has their favourite character on it, rather than having limited
options to choose from. The title will be written along the side of the handle
so it is clear as to what TV show the mug is for and the same font will be used
as the font for the poster and t-shirt.
Wednesday, 19 November 2014
Todorov's Narrative Theory
Todorov's narrative theory consists of five stages which define the common structure within a narrative.
1. Equilibrium (balance)
2. Disruption of equilibrium
3. Recognition of disruption of equilibrium
4. Repair of disruption of equilibrium
5. Return of equilibrium.
An example of a film that follows this narrative structure is: Step Brothers, directed by Adam Mckay.
1. Equilibrium: At the beginning of the film, Brennan lives with his mother Nancy and Dale lives with his father Robert. Both Brennan and Dale are very happy with their lifestyles because they are extremely reliant on their parents so barely do anything for themselves.
2. Disruption: When Nancy and Robert meet and make the decision to get married, Brennan and Dale become step brothers and are forced to live together and have to share Dale's room which neither of them are pleased about. The men do not get on at all and they are constantly having arguments especially regarding Dale's most prized possession, his drum set. Their life is now very unsettled therefore the equilibrium has been disrupted.
3. Recognition: About half way through the film, Brennan and Dale realise that they have a lot in common and they end up becoming best friends. They begin to understand that their previous arguments were not worthwhile so they put their conflicts aside.
4. Repair: The men attempt to repair the disruption of the equilibrium by each going their own ways and getting separate jobs after finding out Nancy and Robert split up. However, doing this breaks up the family to an even greater extent so Brennan organizes a sales party for the company he works at, in which Dale is also involved in, and invites both Nancy and Robert in the attempt to bring the family back together.
5. Return: At the end of the film, the equilibrium has been restored because Brennan and Dale form an entertainment company together which is very successful and Nancy and Robert get back together again. The four protagonists now live a more peaceful and happy live now the disruption of the equilibrium has been removed.
1. Equilibrium (balance)
2. Disruption of equilibrium
3. Recognition of disruption of equilibrium
4. Repair of disruption of equilibrium
5. Return of equilibrium.
An example of a film that follows this narrative structure is: Step Brothers, directed by Adam Mckay.
1. Equilibrium: At the beginning of the film, Brennan lives with his mother Nancy and Dale lives with his father Robert. Both Brennan and Dale are very happy with their lifestyles because they are extremely reliant on their parents so barely do anything for themselves.
2. Disruption: When Nancy and Robert meet and make the decision to get married, Brennan and Dale become step brothers and are forced to live together and have to share Dale's room which neither of them are pleased about. The men do not get on at all and they are constantly having arguments especially regarding Dale's most prized possession, his drum set. Their life is now very unsettled therefore the equilibrium has been disrupted.
3. Recognition: About half way through the film, Brennan and Dale realise that they have a lot in common and they end up becoming best friends. They begin to understand that their previous arguments were not worthwhile so they put their conflicts aside.
4. Repair: The men attempt to repair the disruption of the equilibrium by each going their own ways and getting separate jobs after finding out Nancy and Robert split up. However, doing this breaks up the family to an even greater extent so Brennan organizes a sales party for the company he works at, in which Dale is also involved in, and invites both Nancy and Robert in the attempt to bring the family back together.
5. Return: At the end of the film, the equilibrium has been restored because Brennan and Dale form an entertainment company together which is very successful and Nancy and Robert get back together again. The four protagonists now live a more peaceful and happy live now the disruption of the equilibrium has been removed.
Christmas, Consumerism And The Role Of The Media
Christmas advertisements are
constructed, despite how cute, heart-warming and harmless they appear to be.
The companies want to draw in the weak and easily influenced audiences and
persuade them to buy the product that they are advertising. However, some companies
are very smart and discretely advertise a product without the audience
realising what they are doing, meaning they are being 'sucked in' therefore may
end up unintentionally buying the product, resulting in audience consumption
being very high. The majority of advertisements including ones based on the
theme of Christmas follow an audience theory known as the hypodermic needle
theory because the media assume that the audience are empty vessels who know
nothing so are easily manipulated by the media itself. This theory is displayed
in Christmas advertisements because the audience are tricked into believing
that in order to have a ‘fulfilled’ Christmas, they must buy the product being
advertised. Christmas advertisements such as John Lewis, Sainsbury’s and Boots
follow many of the points I have brought across.
The John Lewis Christmas
advertisement 2014:
John Lewis are very well known for
their annual Christmas advertisements and this year was no exception. The 2014
advertisement is about a young boy who has a pet penguin named ‘Monty’. As the
advert develops, we discover than Monty is lonely and is in need of a female
penguin to keep him company which he predictably receives at the very end. John
Lewis has purposely used a young boy and a baby penguin because they know the
audience will find them exceptionally cute therefore will be drawn in to watch
the rest of the advertisement. The themes of love, happiness and friendship are
displayed throughout and these are themes that many people associate with
Christmas, causing them to relate more with the advertisement. John Lewis, as
usual, have used an emotional but catchy song in the background that they know
will stick in peoples head therefore meaning that every time they hear or think
about that particular song, they will remember the John Lewis advert and the
product being advertised within it, which is this case is Monty the penguin.
The advertisement is over two
minutes long which means that John Lewis must have spent a lot of money on
producing it and they would not have done that unless they knew Monty the
penguin was going to provide them with a high profit. It has been evidenced
that John Lewis created the toy versions of Monty and Mabel before the
advertisement which proves that they knew the penguins were going to be very
popular with their audience and would sell out in stores quickly; a very smart
and cunning move made by the company.
The Sainsbury’s Christmas advertisement
2014:
Personally, the Sainsbury’s Christmas
advertisement is my favourite because it focuses on the First World War
therefore is very emotional and genuine. It is about the soldiers on the front
line during the first Christmas of WW1 (1914) and how both the British and
German soldiers came together for that one day. Themes such as giving, remembrance
and friendship are expressed in the advertisement because at the end, a British
and German soldier exchange a chocolate bar for a shortbread biscuit which represents
how Christmas is for giving and being kind to one another.
Sainsbury’s were very clever and
brought out this advertisement soon after Remembrance Day and also because it
has been one hundred years since the start of World War One. This means the advertisement
relates to what is happening now resulting in more people watching it and
feeling engaged with the themes and messages within it. However, the chocolate
bar which is shown towards the end is being sold in Sainsbury’s stores meaning
that although one of the main purposes of this advertisement is to raise
awareness and remembrance for WW1, they still aim for members of their audience
to buy the chocolate bar after watching the advertisement due to being influenced
and emotionally affected by it.
The Boots Christmas advertisement
2014:
The Boots advertisement focuses on
a Mother who could not be home for Christmas with her family due to her working
hours. However on Boxing Day, her family all get up at around midnight to go to
the Mothers house in order to surprise her when she arrives home from work.
This narrative explores the themes of family, generosity, love, togetherness
and the idea of the Mother completing the family. Boots chose a very realistic
topic to work upon meaning the audience will find the advertisement relatable, especially
if they have a family member who works demanding hours such as night shifts as
a nurse resulting in them not being at home for Christmas. There was a good use
of Mise-En-Scene throughout, for example, the snow was used because it is one
of the many symbols of Christmas so really helps to set the scene.
Although products from boots are
being advertised throughout, it is done in a more discrete manner and I
personally do not feel persuaded to go and buy a product from boots that I saw
in the advertisement because it mainly made me just think about the importance
of family during Christmas Time.
Further Development Of My Coursework Idea
Character development:
Episodes: The first episode would be called 'the discovery' and the audience will mainly be introduced to the different characters and will get to know more about them regarding their personalities. Within this episode, the characters will realise that they are trapped in the haunted hotel and they are yet to discover the way out. The first characters the audience are introduced to are Jack and Clare, followed by Kate and Amelia. The majority of the episode will consist of Jack, Clare and Kate finding and questioning the other characters and all of them are discovered in their individual hotel rooms apart from Holly. However, no-one realises that there is still another person to be found meaning their new focus is to try and remember their past, their main goal being what their name is; to which none of them succeed. Towards the end of the episode, the characters will hear the sound of a girl screaming which is coming from one of the hotel rooms which they did not spot in the first place. Jack immediately takes charge and leads a few members of the group (Clare, Kate who is still clutching Amelia and Max) to the room and as they get very close, Holly charges out. She is still screaming hysterically and when she notices Amelia, she frantically points at her shouting: “It was you! They’re after you, it was you, it was you!” This is the first ‘foreshadowing nightmare’ of the series which informs Holly that Amelia is going to be taken over by the supernatural forces of the hotel. However, the other characters and audience do not know this yet because the episode will end here as a lot of suspense has been built up meaning the audience will be left wondering what is going to happen next resulting in them wanting to watch the next episode.
- Married couple are called Jack and Clare (they are the main protagonists).
- Jack- aged 20. He is the smart character who likes to take control and he believes that he is always right. He has serious anger problems and before the
wedding, he used to abuse Clare which has left her with scars all over her
body. Jack has anger issues due to his poor upbringing in which his step dad
would abuse his mother in front of Jack; therefore he has been influenced by
his awful behaviour. Jack's ethnicity is Irish and he is tall, muscular and pale skinned. He has dark,
curly hair and dark, deep-set eyes with no sparkle to them at all. His beard
has an un-trimmed look to it, making him appear ‘rough and rugged’. He has a tattoo
of a skull on his right shoulder in order to show that he is violent and not
easily frightened. When he wakes up in the hotel, he is only wearing a pair of
shorts (the wedding suit has gone missing) and the only outfit he has taken
with him is a pair of dark blue jeans and a white, three quarter length top.
- Clare- aged 19. She is a 'people pleaser' who wants to get on with everyone. However, she is easily freaked out and frightened despite how brave she attempts to be. She is this way due to being bullied at school
and being abused by Jack which has scarred her personality for life. She was
brought up by both her English mother and father who were both very over-protective and
were very strict on her until she fell in love with Jack meaning they had to
let Clare gain her independence. She is reasonably short with long, straight,
light blonde hair which gives her a look of innocence. She has large, blue eyes
to portray vulnerability and her right eye has a very faded bruise circling it
which was caused by Jack, she has numerous scars around her body and especially
on her back. She wakes up wearing her nightwear and her wedding dress has also
gone missing. The outfit she has taken with her to the hotel is a light blue
pair of tight skinny jeans and a grey jumper with a white collar.
- Holly- Clare's best friend, aged 18. She is the complete opposite of Clare and frequently gets into arguments with the other characters because she never wants to help out. Her parents were born in Essex and she was very spoilt when growing up, she would
always get what she wanted and she never had to do anything for herself. She
has a very stubborn personality and did not have many friends during her years
at school as a result of this; she became best friends with Clare as they both
struggled with making friends so ended up bonding very well. Holly wears a lot
of make-up and straightens her jet black hair every day so her daily look is
not ‘natural’. The outfit she brought to the hotel was a pair of black,
skin-tight jeans, a black crop top and large, gold hoop earrings.
- Tyler- Jack's best friend, aged 19. He is the sporty one who puts a lot of time and effort into his appearance. Him and Clare eventually fall for one another before she realises that she is actually married to Jack. When Clare does realise this, it causes conflict. Tyler had a very normal upbringing and his
parents were rich so he went to a private school and college that specialised
in sport. His Father is Nigerian and his Mother is English. He knows he is good looking and at times, can be very full of himself
however; he has a caring personality so gets on quite well with the other
characters. He is very tanned and muscular with sparkling brown eyes and a quiff that has been dyed blonde which he clearly spends a long time styling each morning. The outfit he
brought to the hotel was a pair of blue, skinny jeans and a white vest top
which clearly ‘shows off’ his muscles.
- The twin brothers are called Patrick and Sean- their ethnicity is Welsh
- Patrick- aged 17. He is the shy one and is extremely smart but is afraid to speak out (wasted talent). The reason for this is because when growing up,
Sean would constantly get all of the attention from their parents so Patrick
was always left by himself. This meant he spent the majority of time alone in
his room where he would constantly study which is why he is extremely smart. He
is very well dressed and wears smart, black jeans with a red polo top and
polished brown shoes. He has dark hair which is combed back and he has
glistening green eyes which are hidden by his large, wide framed glasses.
- Sean-aged 17. He is the 'dumb' one however is very chatty so gets on well with the other characters. Due to him being less academic, he would always
be centre of attention with his parents as they wanted to help him as much as
possible. The same applied to when he was at school as he would get a lot of
attention from the teachers and he was also very popular with the other
students because he has a friendly personality. He does not care about his appearance
and he wears a full grey tracksuit with scruffy trainers. Like Patrick, he has
glistening green eyes however, he does not wear glasses and his dark hair is
extremely long and messy and looks as if he never brushes it.
- Kate- aged 19. She is a single Mother born in Croydon who has a baby daughter named Amelia. Kate is often very stressed and worried and her main priority is her daughter. Her boyfriend left her as soon as he found out she was pregnant so she was left to raise Amelia completely by herself. She does not have a job so struggles to live a healthy lifestyle and before she was pregnant, she lived off her boyfriend’s high earnings because he ran his own business. She has mousy, brown hair up to her shoulders, a large amount of freckles and dull, hazel eyes. She wears a tartan print skirt with black tights, a white t-shirt and a black cardigan. They are all poor quality clothes to represent how she has a low quality of life.
- Amelia- aged 5 months. She is the daughter of Kate and is the first character to become possessed in the series. . Due to her very young age, she does not yet have a distinctive personality but she tends to cry more than would be expected of a baby her age. When Amelia does become possessed, the characters notice strange things such as her floating above her cot and her eyes turning a bright, evil red colour.
- Jake- aged 15. He is the geek who is obsessed with comic books and computer games and he forms a very close bond with Sean as they are both talkative. He comes from a Jamaican background and he grew
up without a mother, as she died in a car crash when Jake was very young, so
has a close relationship with his father who is a comic book illustrator. After
he has the dreams which enable him to remember his Father, Jake becomes very
homesick as he is one of the younger characters and he begins to miss his
Father an awful lot. The dreams also enable him to remember his Mother which he
is emotionally affected by because he knows that it is only within his dreams
that he is given the opportunity to see his Mother. Jake wears a pair of black
jeans with a blue, marvels top which expresses his passion for comic books. He
has jet black hair which is plated into short dreadlocks and small, chocolate
coloured eyes which hold warmth and kindness.
- Max-aged 16. He is passionate about science so is extremely fascinated by the supernatural forces within the hotel and is eager to discover more about them. He has always believed in ghosts and claims to
have had visions of them ever since he was young. Both of his parents are
scientists so they encouraged him to focus on subjects such as biology,
chemistry and physics at school so he could go on to study them at college. He
often had a great amount of pressure on him to achieve perfect grades and would
get shouted at and punished if he did not achieve the grades his parents
expected of him. He was brought up in an Indian background and has dark, silky
hair with mysterious brown eyes which hold curiosity. He is very tall and wears
dark grey jeans and a baseball top in the colours black and white.
Patrick, Sean, Kate, Jake and Max are all close friends of Jack and Clare.
The setting: The hotel itself is in an isolated, eerie area and it is surrounded by a creepy graveyard and an extremely old church which is rarely used. This is the same church Jack and Clare got married in at the very beginning of the first episode. The weather is generally dark and gloomy, there is barely any sunlight to represent how the characters are in a mysterious area. The inside of the hotel has long, empty corridors and the windows are boarded up. The food and drink in order for the characters to survive is stored in the basement.
Music: I would make use of dramatic, suspensive music that will build up during intense scenes in order to leave my audience at the edge of their seats. When the characters are creeping around the hotel, I would use quiet, piano music because it creates a sense of mystery.
The escape out of the
hotel: The first ‘challenge’ the characters will come across is a
mysterious, old, black, rusty door which has a numbered code they have to work
out in order to unlock the door. The code is all their ages added together
however, it takes a very long time for them to figure it out and Jake is the
character who eventually realises what they have to do. Once they unlock this
door, a long corridor which appears to be never-ending is revealed to which
most of the characters are terrified by so only a few decide to venture through
in order to find out what lies at the end of the corridor. A new challenge will
not be found and instead they appear to be back in the original setting of the
hotel so the characters have to search for the new challenge. This is so the
dreams and nightmares can still occur and this process will continue until the
end of the series with additional obstacles such as ghosts that will always attempt
to prevent the protagonist’s from reaching their goals. The other challenges
would include: crosswords which require the characters to know a great amount
about their past; mazes and intense games which require skill, memory and
patience.
Episodes: The first episode would be called 'the discovery' and the audience will mainly be introduced to the different characters and will get to know more about them regarding their personalities. Within this episode, the characters will realise that they are trapped in the haunted hotel and they are yet to discover the way out. The first characters the audience are introduced to are Jack and Clare, followed by Kate and Amelia. The majority of the episode will consist of Jack, Clare and Kate finding and questioning the other characters and all of them are discovered in their individual hotel rooms apart from Holly. However, no-one realises that there is still another person to be found meaning their new focus is to try and remember their past, their main goal being what their name is; to which none of them succeed. Towards the end of the episode, the characters will hear the sound of a girl screaming which is coming from one of the hotel rooms which they did not spot in the first place. Jack immediately takes charge and leads a few members of the group (Clare, Kate who is still clutching Amelia and Max) to the room and as they get very close, Holly charges out. She is still screaming hysterically and when she notices Amelia, she frantically points at her shouting: “It was you! They’re after you, it was you, it was you!” This is the first ‘foreshadowing nightmare’ of the series which informs Holly that Amelia is going to be taken over by the supernatural forces of the hotel. However, the other characters and audience do not know this yet because the episode will end here as a lot of suspense has been built up meaning the audience will be left wondering what is going to happen next resulting in them wanting to watch the next episode.
The rest of the episodes will vary between certain main
topics. Some episodes will focus purely on character development and looking
into the characters dreams to discover more about their past and for some,
their involvement with the supernatural. Some will focus on the nightmares
which foreshadow deaths and possessions that happen within the hotel and the
characters attempts to prevent themselves from dreaming them in order to stop
the events from occurring. Some episodes will be about the characters escape
from the hotel and the various stages within the hotel they have to complete in
order to get closer to finding a way out. Of course, many of the episodes will
contain a mixture of these main topics. As the episodes develop, new characters
will be discovered but this will not be until later in the series in order to
give the audience a chance of getting to know the original characters very well
so they feel a connection with them.
Development Of My Coursework Idea
What TV shows or films are similar to my idea?
Lost- it uses flashbacks to show the characters past and in my TV show, dreams are used to show the characters past. The characters in lost are trapped on an island and the characters in my TV show are trapped in a haunted hotel.
American Horror Story- the first season, called murder house, is set in a haunted mansion which has several ghosts within it- this is a similar setting to my TV show.
The Shining- It is based in a haunted hotel, in which the male protagonist Johnny becomes possessed due to the supernatural forces within the hotel. As my TV series develops, certain characters will become possessed which has been foreshadowed in people's nightmares.
Lost- it uses flashbacks to show the characters past and in my TV show, dreams are used to show the characters past. The characters in lost are trapped on an island and the characters in my TV show are trapped in a haunted hotel.
American Horror Story- the first season, called murder house, is set in a haunted mansion which has several ghosts within it- this is a similar setting to my TV show.
The Shining- It is based in a haunted hotel, in which the male protagonist Johnny becomes possessed due to the supernatural forces within the hotel. As my TV series develops, certain characters will become possessed which has been foreshadowed in people's nightmares.
Were these films/TV
shows successful and if so, why? I have watched both Lost and The Shining and they were both
extremely successful due to having well-known actors, outstanding character development
and gripping narratives. Lost consisted of six seasons and each one allowed the
narrative to develop to an even greater extent, with not one episode being ‘dull’
or ‘boring’. The shining attracted many viewers who are interested in
thrillers/horrors that feature paranormal creatures and the film was truly
petrifying at times. I discovered American Horror Story when looking through a list
of horror TV series on IMDb and after researching further into it on IMDb, I
realised that it was a very successful show that is still running which so far
consists of four seasons, the first season being set in a haunted mansion.
Who is my audience?
Who is my audience?
My audience is teenagers ranging from the ages 15-19 because
the TV series is post-watershed so certain parts may be un-suitable for people
below the age of fifteen. My audience should have previously enjoyed thrillers
and horrors, such as the ones listed above, in order for them to enjoy this TV
series and I have purposely made the characters young adults in order for the
audience to relate and engage with them more. Additionally, my audience
consists of both males and females because there is not gender dominance within
my characters and the narrative is not aimed at one particular gender.
What themes are in my TV series?
The themes in my TV series are: entrapment, escape,
friendship, love, conflict, teamwork, determination, control and desperation. Entrapment is shown through the characters being trapped within the hotel and their goal is to escape by using teamwork however, love and conflict are major obstacles that at times, prevent the characters from achieving their goal. As the series develops, the characters become desperate to escape out of the hotel but determination is not all they need in order to help them succeed; they need to learn how to control their nightmares in order for deaths and possessions not to happen. Lost,
American Horror Story and The Shining share themes that are very similar to
these.
What happens in the opening scene?
The opening scene will start at the wedding where Jack and
Clare are saying their wedding vows as they stare lovingly into one another's eyes. After the elderly and quite creepy looking vicar says, “You may kiss the
bride” the rest of the wedding will fast forward up until one of the characters
wakes up in the hotel. The fast forward scenes will show the wedding reception
and the ten friends walking into the mysterious hotel to stay there overnight as the other wedding guests drive home. The audience will
firstly be introduced to the married couple, Jack and Clare who suddenly wake up lying
next to each other, they do not know they are married due to being wiped of
memory therefore are very shocked and disorientated and these emotions are
shown by their facial expressions. The first line would be Jack who
aggressively says: “who the hell are you, and where am I? Clare would then
reply with: “how am I supposed to know, I’m as clueless as you are”. They would then leap out of bed, apart from each other and slowly begin to investigate
around the dark room, full of cobwebs and creaky floorboards and when Jack
opens the door and stares down the long, gloomy corridor, they come to the realisation
that they are in a hotel as they notice numerous doors with numbers on them.
Before they explore any further, Jack and Clare acknowledge that they do not
know each other’s names and Clare asks Jack: “So what is your name anyway?” to
which Jack responds in an extremely panicked tone: “Damn! I’ve forgotten what
my name is! What is up with this hotel, I can’t seem to remember anything”.
Clare would then say: “we should probably get out of here right now before
strange stuff starts happening”.
Jack and Clare would then slowly creep through the eerie
hotel, in order to stay un-noticed, with Jack leading the way until they come across an exit which appears to be jammed shut, not
thinking anything of it; they find their way to another exit which is also
completely locked. At this point, they begin to panic, especially Clare who immediately begins to expect the worst, be as they come to the terms
that they may be trapped inside the hotel. Their next thought is to attempt to
escape through a window so they cautiously walk into a hotel room, which to
their dismay has no windows and is lit by a single lamp, to find Kate and Amelia
(the single Mother and her baby daughter) sound asleep. Kate is very pale
looking due to a rough night and when Clare notices her fully, she screams in
terror which causes them both to wake up. Clare continues to scream which
results in Kate screaming and Amelia begins to cry hysterically; this only
lasts for a short amount of time because Jack shouts at the top of his lungs in
a very angry tone: “just be quiet, all of you!” which almost immediately leads
to silence. Jack fires questions at Kate, asking what her name is, how she got
in the hotel and who Amelia is to which Kate knows none of the answers. Clare
and Jack begin to understand that Kate has also lost all of her memory and she
is also advised by Clare to: “look after the baby, there is no harm in doing so
and we cannot leave her alone in this room”. Jack then suddenly realises that
there may be other people who were staying in the hotel the previous night and
is very eager to go and search for them in case they know a way out. When he
suggests this to Clare and Kate, they are both very apprehensive and argue
against Jack’s idea until he pressurises them, in a very forceful manor, to go
along with him. He does this by firstly shouting at them, then by threatening them as he shakes his fist; Clare and Kate are frightened by what Jack is doing so reluctantly agree with his idea.The three of them slowly walk out of the room in single file,
Kate is holding Amelia as close to her as possible; quiet music plays which is
building up as Jack softly calls: “hellooo, is anyone there, hello?”...
I believe that this would be a very effective opening scene
because firstly, it informs the audience on why the characters are in the hotel
so gives them context, meaning they will be able to understand what is going
on. Secondly, it effectively introduces the audience to the two main
protagonists: Jack and Clare and they almost immediately get to learn more
about their personalities, for example, Jack being aggressive and Clare being
easily frightened. The audience are able to realise that the characters have
been wiped of memory and are trapped in the hotel with no obvious escape, which
in turn should keep them intrigued and wanting to find out more, resulting in
them continuing to watch the episode and the rest of the series. Additionally,
the setting of the hotel and the rooms within it are shown in the opening scene
which gives the audience a clear idea on where the episodes are going to take place
however also leaves them wondering if there are hidden places within the hotel
as they are only given a small insight into the setting.
Thursday, 13 November 2014
Coursework- Initial Idea For A Teen Horror/ Supernatural Series
First thoughts:
Nightmare or paranormal nightmares: About a group of twenty
completely different people who survived a shipwreck (the other people on the
ship died) to find themselves washed up onto a haunted island. These people,
little do they know, all have some involvement with the supernatural which is
the reason for their unusual survival, however they do not know this and the
only way they can discover their past is in their dreams. These first
nightmares however are foreshadowing a death or possession that will happen to
one of the characters and they are not aware of this until two have passed
away. The only way for the nightmare not to come true is by not dreaming it,
which is almost impossible and the characters have the immense challenge of
trying to control their dreams to try and defeat the paranormal forces on the
island. At the same time, they still need to discover about their past to
understand why they survived the shipwreck and what they can do to help defeat
these forces.
Development of
this idea:
Instead of being on an island about twenty people surviving
a shipwreck, the television series could be based in a haunted hotel. The
reason they are in the hotel is because the night before, there was a wedding
and the married couple and their closest friends all stayed in the same hotel
that night (there were no other guests in the hotel). When they wake up the
next morning, they are trapped in the hotel (all the doors are locked) and they
have all been completely wiped of memory. The only way they can regain the
stories of their past is within their dreams and as the series develops, they
and the audience begin to understand that each of the characters have some
involvement with the supernatural. However, there are times when a character
has a nightmare which foreshadows something awful (e.g. a death or possession) that
is going to happen to someone and when they realise this, the characters must
find a way of controlling their dreams so the supernatural forces of the hotel
do not overcome them completely. The main problem is that the only way for the
nightmare not to come true is by not dreaming it but the characters still need
to dream about their past to understand why certain things occur in the hotel.
There are additional ‘obstacles’ within the hotel such as ghosts (which the
characters at some point could be able to interact with) and as the people
explore further into the hotel, they discover more and more secrets that lie
within it.
In order to find an escape out of the hotel, the characters
realise that there are challenges and quests that must be completed, for
example, secret mazes and coded puzzles. During the completion of these
challenges, characters are killed or they disappear but also new characters are
discovered that have been trapped in the hotel ever since they last stayed
there.
The title:
·
The title of my television series would be:
possessed.
Genre:
·
Supernatural
·
Horror
·
Thriller
The characters:
· 10 characters at the beginning of the first
season- all under the age of 25. I have decided that they should be of a young
age so the teen audience can easily relate to them. One of the characters is a
very young child or baby because people are emotionally affected by children.
The receptionists that worked at the hotel have gone missing and later on in
the series they are found to be dead or possessed.
·
New characters are found as the series
develops, they are slightly older due to being trapped in the hotel for a
longer amount of time. These new characters also help the original characters
to control their nightmares.
·
Due to being wiped of memory, the couple do not
remember getting married and they fall for different people. However, when they
realise they got married when they dream about it, arguments begin to occur and
there is a lot of drama between the characters.
·
There would be a mixture of both male and female
characters- no dominance of one gender in order to make the characters
relatable to a male and female audience.
·
We learn more about the characters through their
dreams. The first episode will not begin with the wedding but with the
characters waking up in the hotel, I am doing this so the audience can share
their confusion and so they only know as much as the characters know, therefore
helping the audience to engage with them to a greater extent.
Setting:
·
England, in a haunted hotel (called church’s
yard hotel) which is surrounded by an old church and a graveyard. The lighting
will be dark to create tension and suspense.
Music/sound:
·
During intense scenes, there would be quiet
music that gradually builds up creating suspense and to make the audience feel
more involved with what is happening. I would also use children’s nursery rhyme
music because it is effective as teen audience would find it sinister.
·
I would make use of sound effects such as
screaming to alarm the audience.
Technical aspects:
·
It would consist of two or three seasons, each
containing 15 episodes.
·
Each episode would be 40 minutes long.
·
Post watershed (after 9:00).
Wednesday, 5 November 2014
Grayson Perry: Who Are You
Grayson Perry: Who Are You is a three-part Channel 4
documentary which is distributed by All3Media International.
Who it was made by:
- Music: Avshalom Caspi
- Camera: Louis Caulfield, Marcus Plowright
- Sound: Adam Scourfield
- Production Co-ordinator: David Brooke
- Production Manager: Caroline Turner
- Researcher: Molly Schneider
- Assistant Producer: Marvyn Benoit
- Producer: Juliet Riddell
- Editor: Jake Martin
- Executive Producer: Dinah Lord
- Series Producer: Joe Evans
- Director: Neil Crombie
The documentary that we watched in class is about an artist
named Grayson Perry who gets to know four individuals who all struggle or have
struggled with their identity. These individuals are Chris Huhne, Rylan Clark,
Kayleigh and Jazz. He discovers more
about their personal lives and how they are more to what they appear to be on
the outside because it is necessary that he understood who the subjects think
they are. From this information, Perry creates a portrait of each of these
people which reflects their stories and identity and at the end of the episode,
they are able to see these portraits which have been put up in the National
Portrait Gallery.
Personally, I really enjoyed this documentary because I like
the way it shows the journey of the individuals and how they have changed and
developed throughout their life based on the important decisions they have
made. I additionally like how Grayson Perry has taken these substantial factors
and then embedded them within the portraits because it makes them extremely
personal and also reflective on the people’s past and who they are now as an
individual. Each portrait is completely different from the next because they
are all made from dissimilar mediums and are of contrasting sizes which mirrors
the people’s distinctive personalities; this in turn gives the portraits a very
high significance because it shows how everyone has a unique identity and a
different story.
I believe that this documentary is very clever because it
focuses on those who are struggling with defining their identity and who they
are or who they were as a person and then towards the end, they have the
opportunity to see themselves through the eyes of Grayson Perry. This helps
them to understand how they are seen by other people and they themselves can
begin to acknowledge who they really are as a person, they are discovering
their identity.
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